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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #75 on: May 23, 2010, 03:51:02 am »
Wow ceritanya hwat jg sist :P :P :P :P :P
disini junpyo ma jandi adik kakak tapi saudara angkat kan sista??
Junpyo di sini karakternya kyknya manfaatin keluguan jandi ya tapi aku suka bgt ma scene hwat'y cz udh lama ngga baca yg hwat2...
Hahahahaha [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol]
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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #76 on: May 23, 2010, 04:16:18 am »
Quote from: fara on May 23, 2010, 03:51:02 am
Wow ceritanya hwat jg sist :P :P :P :P :P
disini junpyo ma jandi adik kakak tapi saudara angkat kan sista??
Junpyo di sini karakternya kyknya manfaatin keluguan jandi ya tapi aku suka bgt ma scene hwat'y cz udh lama ngga baca yg hwat2...
Hahahahaha [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol]


gamsahamnida sist.. [smiley-dance013] salam kenal ya..? [biggrin]
sist.. mrka tuh kakak adik tiri.. Ayahnya JD sama EH mnkh lgi sma ibunya JP saat ibunya mrka mnggl.. Tapi, ada sesuatu yang menyimpang dri khdpan ibu JP.. Coz, Ibu JP itu jg adalah tmn SMA dulu Ibunya JD..
nnti, krna itu cinta mrka kan trsa brt.. Jdi, trus ngikutin crtnya ya sist..  [biggrin] [biggrin]
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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #77 on: May 23, 2010, 08:04:50 am »
Paraaaah..paraaaaah bgt sist..my god!! Kenapa junpyo jd begitu sifatnyaa.. Memanfaatkan keluguan seorang gadis.. Fuuuh.. Syok sekali bacanya..junpyoku sayang.. Otaknya mesum bgt... :(
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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #78 on: May 23, 2010, 08:38:42 am »
Quote from: neiya on May 23, 2010, 08:04:50 am
Paraaaah..paraaaaah bgt sist..my god!! Kenapa junpyo jd begitu sifatnyaa.. Memanfaatkan keluguan seorang gadis.. Fuuuh.. Syok sekali bacanya..junpyoku sayang.. Otaknya mesum bgt... :(

sekali-kali npa eon..??  [hmpfh] [hmpfh] [hmpfh],
kan, klo gtu klo ada cwk yg deket ama JD bsa cmburu brt,,, kan seneng klo ng liat  [on] sama pas JP cmburu ama JD... [laughing]
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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #79 on: May 23, 2010, 08:44:49 am »
Tapi ya masa km buat junpyoku jadi wild bgt siii saaay.. Kesannya kayak penjahat kelamin bgt.. :(

Pokonya di next chapt km ubah junpyo jadi pria baik"ya tanpa fikiran kotor dan nafsu yang sangat parah :(
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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #80 on: May 23, 2010, 08:57:09 am »
Quote from: Lia ~MinSun~ pink on May 23, 2010, 04:16:18 am
Quote from: fara on May 23, 2010, 03:51:02 am
Wow ceritanya hwat jg sist :P :P :P :P :P
disini junpyo ma jandi adik kakak tapi saudara angkat kan sista??
Junpyo di sini karakternya kyknya manfaatin keluguan jandi ya tapi aku suka bgt ma scene hwat'y cz udh lama ngga baca yg hwat2...
Hahahahaha [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol] [lol]


gamsahamnida sist.. [smiley-dance013] salam kenal ya..? [biggrin]
sist.. mrka tuh kakak adik tiri.. Ayahnya JD sama EH mnkh lgi sma ibunya JP saat ibunya mrka mnggl.. Tapi, ada sesuatu yang menyimpang dri khdpan ibu JP.. Coz, Ibu JP itu jg adalah tmn SMA dulu Ibunya JD..
nnti, krna itu cinta mrka kan trsa brt.. Jdi, trus ngikutin crtnya ya sist..  [biggrin] [biggrin]

oh ternyata mereka saudara tiri...wah aku jadi makin penasaran ni sist...
Kyknya ibunya junpyo bakalan jadi ibu tiri yg kejam sama jandi...
Aku akan setia menunggu updetan selanjutnya [biggrin] [biggrin] [biggrin] [biggrin]  [biggrin] [biggrin]
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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #81 on: May 23, 2010, 10:01:03 am »

Quote from: fara on May 23, 2010, 03:51:02 am

oh ternyata mereka saudara tiri...wah aku jadi makin penasaran ni sist...
Kyknya ibunya junpyo bakalan jadi ibu tiri yg kejam sama jandi...
Aku akan setia menunggu updetan selanjutnya [biggrin] [biggrin] [biggrin] [biggrin]  [biggrin] [biggrin]
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maybe sist..
d'tggu aja yo next chapnya...
tpi, kmngkinan next chapnya slese FF 'Twins' sma 'Love Long Seperated'.. :))So, I hope you have patience.. [biggrin] punk
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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #82 on: May 23, 2010, 08:01:36 pm »
Anyong pink ..
wah,wah, itu si junpyo ko' karakterny bgtu yo..?? [what] [what] [what] [what]
serem aq bacany,, ya jgn bgtu2 amat lah sis , chap slnjutny d bwt baik dnk junpyo'ny ..
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dateng2 lngsung protes .. [hmpfh]
d tunggu update slnjutny yya sis , ad yg hawt,hawt, gtu .. [on] [on] [smiley-dance013]
« Last Edit: May 23, 2010, 08:15:47 pm by kimmy_minsun »
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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #83 on: May 23, 2010, 08:29:40 pm »
hai pink [bye] [bye] udah kenalan blon yak lupin daku hehe [biggrin]

wew JP nya mesum bener siy disini banghead banghead banghead memanfaatkan bgt [nono] [nono] [nono] awas ati2 pink ntar di [head break] [head break] [head break] sama mami loh wkwkwk **** lah [hmpfh] [hmpfh] [rofl] [rofl] [rofl]



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Re: The Lucky One (last update chap 1 Mei 23,2010)
« Reply #84 on: May 24, 2010, 01:51:41 am »
He eh setuju ma neiya si junpyo kok di buat hipersex gitu sih...mupeng sih mupeng tapi kok segitunya sih klo benaran dia cinta pasti gak gitu deh...

Hempf...jadi ceritanya ibu junpyo mo balas dendam gitu ma ibunya jandi lewat anak2xnya ya...

klo mereka saudara tiri gini sih susah juga tuk bersatu..

seperti kata revy hati2x di [hammer] mami...
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« Reply #85 on: May 24, 2010, 07:04:30 am »
Sumpah., jp wild abis di sini... Mesum amet ye...

Oh ya... Aku cuma mau ksh tau kalo sudut pandang penceritannya belum jelas antara diaan serbatahu atau akuan sertaan... [biggrin] *gm sih yg lain" sibuk komen betapa sum"nya nih ff, sampe gk memperhatikan ini mungkin...*

di bag pertama udh akuan sertaan, tapi di akhir" pake diaan... Awas loh... Nih ABK gini" udh belajar unsur intrinsik sastra di sekolah... Hehe..

Lanjutkan sist... Tapi... JP nya jgn wild" bgt ya... Jadi gk kondusif tuh... Setuju sm sist revy dan amira... Seperti hyper sex... Hehe... Dia terlihat cuma nafsu dan bergairah doang sm JD, bukan cinta... Mian kalo nih komentar krng mengenakkan...
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« Reply #86 on: May 25, 2010, 01:15:39 am »
Thank You sista-sista udah mau nyempet-nyempetin coment ffkku... punk
ok.. sist nnti ku buat mh ga hyper sex lgi dech... trus crta  [bav] mngkin sdkt.. [hmpfh]

next chap nya bkl ku update slese ff Twins.. sma apa ya..?? [chin] "lupa.com"  [hmpfh]
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« Reply #87 on: May 25, 2010, 04:47:32 am »
sista" sry ya.. ku gnti judulnya coz, judul The Lucky One udah kgk **** ama alur crta neh ff.. [biggrin]
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Re: complicated love (update chap 1 Mei 23,2010) * title change. *
« Reply #88 on: May 25, 2010, 06:41:04 am »
Pink : gakpapa sist, entar deh aku edit indexnya...
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Re: complicated love (update chap 1 Mei 23,2010) * title change. *
« Reply #89 on: May 25, 2010, 07:55:28 am »
Quote from: Amira on May 25, 2010, 06:41:04 am
Pink : gakpapa sist, entar deh aku edit indexnya...

gumawo eonni...  [hug] [hug]  [cheekkiss] Luv U Full dech...  [on]
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