Author Topic: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter Two (26 Feb'11)  (Read 4794 times)

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #60 on: February 04, 2011, 03:21:49 am »
Bersyukur juga..
Untung deh ada temannya di panti..*cew ato cow mi??*jadi perasaan si marcel sedikit berkurang..ya, walpun aq rasa cuma secuil doang..

Aq baca postingan mami,,ni cerita bakal ada mati-matinya..ga bersatu#takkan pernah# karena kematian..*nelan ludah susah2*

oh, jadi mami menghajar si hya..*hhhhyyyyyaaaaaa*
rasain lu hyacint!!*ga tega,,oh hya,,*
From the bottom of my heart,,
i wish you here with me ever and forever..
Become a real couple..

Aza aza hwaiting!!!

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #61 on: February 04, 2011, 06:50:03 pm »
baru chp satu tp nuasanya udah kelabu  [sweat]  ga ada sweet2nya amat  [heh]

tp tenang mam, aku bakal setia mantengin, malahan udah bikin lapangan di dada biar bs berlapang dada baca ff ini  [laughing]  [laughing]  [laughing]

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #62 on: February 04, 2011, 09:11:45 pm »
gw juga rada2 kelabu nih akibat ff ini [heh] makanya sekrgt fokus ke my little fairy dulu (MRD) [hmpfh] [hmpfh]

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #63 on: February 05, 2011, 12:43:51 am »
gw juga rada2 kelabu nih akibat ff ini [heh] makanya sekrgt fokus ke my little fairy dulu (MRD) [hmpfh] [hmpfh]

GUBRAK si mami tiba2 confuse ama ni FF [hmpfh] [hmpfh] gw sih ga masalah mam ama alur ceritanya mo dibikin happy ending atau sad ending yg penting dari awal gw dah suka ama latar ceritanya yg laen dr yg lainnya, coz gw juga setuju ama mami kalo komunikasi itu gak berjalan yg ada ujung2nya salah paham terus ampe mati dan penyesalannya itu yg bakalan bikin sakit hati  berkepanjangan..

gw suka karakter marcel aka min ho yg laen dari biasanya yg kaya raya, arogan, playboy, tp disini karakter marcel menyimpan sejuta misteri dan penderitaan yg dialami bertahun2 sejak peristiwa kematian ibunya yg tragis and gw juga seneng marcel tdk dendeam sama hyacint tp tetp aja sikapnya bow cool cool gimana gitu, beda ama ayank Rath yg SUPER DUPER HOT tp cuma CINTA ama DAZE [hmpfh] [hmpfh]

yg masih belum gw cerna karakternya Hyacint, disini baru dijelasin kalo Hya suka musik, tp soal keluarganya dan sifatnya belum terkuak *misteri kaleee* [hmpfh], mam,,ayo lanjut mam..

mami mo up date MRD??? [smiley-gen013] [smiley-gen013] [smiley-gen013] [smiley-gen013]senangnya hatiku, monggo mam, ane tunggu di pojokkan up date-annya [lovestruck]


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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #64 on: February 05, 2011, 08:10:22 am »
love mian baru komen...chp awal aja dah bikin sedih...gimana chp2 selanjutnya bener2 bakal nguras air mata nih [chin]
masa lalu marcel kelam amet ya [heh] berarti marcel dan hyachint bukan teman dekat or sahabat ya, karna marcel kan selalu nolongin hyachint sementara hyachint selalu ngerjain si marcel [what]
love marcel mudeng gak klo cewek yang di lihatnya di depan sekolah itu hyachint  [chin]
[lovestruck][lovestruck]
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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #65 on: February 05, 2011, 10:04:19 am »
mam....miss u... [biggrin] [biggrin]
kalo Liko bisa buat lapangan di dada utk berlapang dada,,aq masi blom bisa mam [cry] [cry] [cry]
judulnya aja uda buat  [collapse] gimana entar?? tapi gw tetep baca mam walopun ga tega kalo ampe MinSun dipisahin  [sweat] [sweat]
(bawaan liat judulnya jadi asbak)  [hmpfh] [hmpfh]
fighting mam.. [smiley-gen013]

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #66 on: February 05, 2011, 10:43:01 am »
kasian marcel...kisahnya tragis...tp,dia gak dendam sm hyacint kn???
(bingung mo nulis apa...msh nyesek gr2 kasian sm marcel...poor marcel...blhkn mam,ngelus2 kepalanya marcel???  [biggrin])
tp,walaupn begitu...tetap semangat... [smiley-gen013]

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #67 on: February 05, 2011, 10:21:37 pm »
ok gw jelasin lagi ..
marcel ga dendam ke hyachint. dia ga dendam kepd siapapun yg pernah menghina, mempermainkan dan menyakitinya [biggrin] cuma ada seseorg yg mampu mengejolak selruh emosinya, yaitu abojinya sendiri [cry] [cry]

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #69 on: February 06, 2011, 01:28:05 am »
update dunk mami lov................................ [clap]
update...... [smiley-gen013] [smiley-gen013] [smiley-gen013]
update........ [smiley-gen013] [smiley-gen013] [smiley-gen013]

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #70 on: February 06, 2011, 02:57:33 am »
mak yem, ff ini mungkin nyesek. tp ga bakal menguras byk airmata (permulaannya sih. klu akhirnya mah tragis [sweat] [sweat] )

diamond, marcel punya seorang teman di panti asuhan (bersyukur buat yg satu ini [heh] [heh] yg bakal gw siksa tuh si hyachint. klu marcel kan udah masa lalu [biggrin]

iiu, gunting itu utk membela diri. ga ditusukan ke siapa2 kok. darah yg ada di gunting itu hasil cipratan darah dr luka mengangga di perut ommanya [sweat] [sweat]

vian, marcel emang baik. dia terlalu baik karenanya selalu dijadikan bulan2an teman2nya, termasuk si kecil hyachint [cry] perbedaan biasanya bisa saling melengkapi, tapi di sini gw ingin menceritakan perbedaan yg menyebabkan perpisahan, kesalahpahaman dan penderitaan. lewat ff ini gw ingin menyampaikan pesan bahwa komunikasi itu penting. jika tdk, akibat sebuah salahpaham dpt menyebabkanmu sengsara seumur hidup. kesengsaraan yg tidak bisa diperbaiki karena sudah terpisah oleh kematian. (mungkin tdk sampai sejauh itu. tp entahlah, kita lht saja gimana perkembangan alur dari cerita ini [biggrin] )

heethi, ditunggu komentarnya [biggrin]

azri, lihat reply gw buat vian, thanks [biggrin]

mamiii  [cry] [cry]
koq bawa-bawa kematian c? firasat aku gak enak nie  [cry] [cry]
btw. thx bwt mv nya.... sedih bnget c miii mv itu, hua  [cry]

appa nya minho blm meninggal ya mii? koq bisa?

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #71 on: February 06, 2011, 07:27:32 am »
 [smiley-gen013] [smiley-gen013]

Asssiiiikkk, chapter 1 nya dah keluar....Ini kaya cerita dark love story gitu yak? Apa pun itu, gue pasti suka kok...(yang penting ada Minsunnya  [hmpfh] [hmpfh])...

Ngebaca dari masa lalu si Marcel, gue rasa bisa2 dia jadi orang yang psycho. Tp mudah2an aja ngga. Terus si Hyecin jangan2 jadi yang lebih agresip ya? Mudah2 iya...heheee... Abisan kayanya dia penasaran banget ama kang Marcel. Nanyain melulu, padahal dulu dia kan suka menghina Marcel ye. Mentang2 Marcel dah tumbuh jadi cowo yang ganteng, dia malah super tertarik...

OKD, ditunggu lanjutannya yaaa....


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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #72 on: February 08, 2011, 09:54:17 am »

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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #73 on: February 08, 2011, 10:02:52 am »
MOM !!!!!!!!!!!! JADIIN HAPPY ENDING DONK !!!!!!!!!!!!!! KAN ELU PERNAH BILANG GA BAKALAN BIKIN MINSUN STORY YG AKHIRNYA SAD ENDING !!!!!!!!!!!!  [cry]

gue udah jatuh cinta sama karakter mereka  [goodgrief] jadi harus happy walaupun elu bakal nyiksa hyacinth disini  [dry]


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Re: Broke Up a Fight~Chapter One (3 Feb'11)
« Reply #74 on: February 08, 2011, 10:04:58 am »
MOM !!!!!!!!!!!! JADIIN HAPPY ENDING DONK !!!!!!!!!!!!!! KAN ELU PERNAH BILANG GA BAKALAN BIKIN MINSUN STORY YG AKHIRNYA SAD ENDING !!!!!!!!!!!!  [cry]

gue udah jatuh cinta sama karakter mereka  [goodgrief] jadi harus happy walaupun elu bakal nyiksa hyacinth disini  [dry]


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